Would any of those directions work for you?
Consider the final 30 seconds of Before Sunset (2004). Throughout the film, Jesse and Celine have danced around their regret and lost connection. In the final scene, Celine mimics a Nina Simone song for Jesse. As she undulates, singing "Just in time," Jesse watches her with an expression of devastating recognition. When she stops, she says, "Baby, you are gonna miss that plane." Jesse smiles and says, "I know." Cut to black. The drama explodes in the silence afterward. He has chosen her over his entire life. No explosions, no shouting—just the atomic weight of a simple "I know." That is power. Would any of those directions work for you
"The water's over our heads, El," he says, his voice finally breaking. "Stop trying to breathe." In the final scene, Celine mimics a Nina